This summer i've gone to Cantabria with my friends to stay a week in the beach. All of us love the sea and we would do any aquatic activities there, so we decided to do a little surf course. We'd never done that before and our surprise was the good-looking young boy that would be our teacher!
As son as we found the course, we started the lessons. I'm not bad at sports but definitely, this activity was too difficult. I was always falling down and Jonh, our teacher, laughed with my embarrassing situation. He said that all people was bad at first but i'm sure that i was the worst.
Fortunately, in the end, i improved and i could already stay on the surf board more than 15 seconds. We gave thanks to John and he invited us to a cold drink . He's the best teacher that i've ever had and thanks to him, now i know how to surf!
The narrative has a clear beginning, middle and end: 3
ResponderEliminarEach paragraph expresses a main idea:3
Use of different past tenses:1
Use of time expressions to sequence events: 1
Use of a variety of language: 2
No grammar, spelling or punctuation mistakes: 1
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Mark: 6,1
Surf board
Invite for
How to surf